I made the script for the scene when 'Jack' and 'Johnny' are walking together exiting the college, this was inspired by my research and I adopted the techniques used in those scripts.
EXT. A COLLEGE IN LONDON.PRESENT DAY.
JACK
and JOHNNY leaving college and walking side by side, JACK is holding the
camera and tripod.
JOHNNY:
(rubs hands together, blowing into them, looking at
Jack)
Caw, it’s freezin’ init mate?
JACK:
Yeah, it’s well cold like…
(lifting camera and suggesting)
So we ready to film?
JOHNNY:
Yeah, yeah, sure mate, course.
(Smiles)
JACK:
Alrite then, so err we gotta take shots of
architecture, where we gonna film?
JOHNNY:
Well…we can get to London easy, plus there's loads ov’
it there like
JACK:
(Smiles)
Oh yeah course mate, got ya’ oysta’?
JOHNNY:
(Smiles)
Yeah mate
Fades out
I wanted the characters to have a British cockney accent and I wanted the audience to see their friendly relationship.
We changed the relationship to a friendly one because having them as brothers was a bit too complicated and, generally speaking, brothers may not get along as much as friends do. Also, siblings can have very different interests to each other and don't necessarily choose the same subject. This choice of relationship was influenced by my Video Questionnaire - Characters
Just a quick update, thanks for reading, keep following, feedback is appreciated :)
We changed the relationship to a friendly one because having them as brothers was a bit too complicated and, generally speaking, brothers may not get along as much as friends do. Also, siblings can have very different interests to each other and don't necessarily choose the same subject. This choice of relationship was influenced by my Video Questionnaire - Characters
Just a quick update, thanks for reading, keep following, feedback is appreciated :)
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