Listening to first recordings of 'Radio Report', using Premier Pro
Having discussed, we realised that we needed to change the script as it didn't seem flow properly. This is shown in the following.
Firstly, we annotated it:
Amendments made to 'Radio Report'
Secondly, we made the changes in Microsoft Office Word:
Good evening, all you Londoner’s! I’m Dawn Cope and you’re listening to ‘Look out’ Radio’s 60-second news updates
Have you recently seen anything unusual?
We have reports of sightings in Oxford Street of a young female, early teens, wearing a ripped, blood stained, white night gown.
She is said to have marks across her face and skin, possibly abrasions or bruising.
She is also said to have long dark, matted hair.
If you believe you have seen this girl, or someone of a similar description, please do not hesitate, report immediately to your local Police Station and Lookout Radio…
Heading today’s 'More Money Than Sense' is Katie Price, who has recently bought a new 9 and a half thousand pound handbag and says it’s “a splash of cash for my little Princess”
Thirdly, I recorded it again and uploaded it to Premier Pro:
We have reports of sightings in Oxford Street of a young female, early teens, wearing a ripped, blood stained, white night gown.
She is said to have marks across her face and skin, possibly abrasions or bruising.
She is also said to have long dark, matted hair.
If you believe you have seen this girl, or someone of a similar description, please do not hesitate, report immediately to your local Police Station and Lookout Radio…
Heading today’s 'More Money Than Sense' is Katie Price, who has recently bought a new 9 and a half thousand pound handbag and says it’s “a splash of cash for my little Princess”
Thirdly, I recorded it again and uploaded it to Premier Pro:
Listening to second recording of 'Radio Report', using Premier Pro
Hopefully we are done with editing the script!
Feedback appreciated, keep following thanks :)
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