Radio Report Script 3

As we've changed the location of our filming and costume of our female ghost I needed to edit the dialogue for the Radio report script. After making the necessary changes and printing the script I realised that any Radio broadcast that wanted the public's contact would give their contact information.

I annotated it and made the next changes:

Here's the newer version:

Good evening all you Londoner's! I'm Dawn Cope and you're listening to Lookout Radio's sixty second news updates

Have you recently seen anything unusual? We have reports  of sightings in Camden Town of a young female, early teens, wearing a ripped, blood stained, white t-shirt and ripped blood stained denim jeans. She is said to have marks across her face, possibly abrasions or bruising. She is also said to have long blond matted hair.

If you believe you have seen this girl, or someone of a similar description,please do not hesitate, report immediately to your local Police Station and Lookout Radio.

Our telephone is, 0800 454 6712, that's, 0800 454 6712. You can also contact us on our website www.lookoutradio.co.uk/contact

Headlining today's 'More Money Than Sense' is Katie Price who has recently bought a new nine and a half thousand pound Loui Vuitton hand bag says, "It's a splash of cash for my little Princess"

The contact information in this Radio Report is fabricated and is not intended to be similar or the same as any living individual or company.

I do realise that this is just the dialogue for the script and I will be configuring the final one after composing more sounds for it.

Thanks for following, feedback is much appreciated :)