Radio Report Script 4

As I've experimented with and now wish to use the sound that I experimented with, I have edited in the effects and directions for Patrycja, so she knows where to put the non-diagetic radio and when to fade the diagetic Radio presenter of it: 

Radio report script

Non-diagetic radio report interruption

Good evening all you Londoner's! I'm Dawn Cope and you're listening to Lookout Radio's sixty second news updates

Have you recently seen anything unusual? We have reports  of sightings in Camden Town of a young female, early teens, wearing a ripped, blood stained, white t-shirt and ripped blood stained denim jeans. She is said to have marks across her face, possibly abrasions or bruising. She is also said to have long blond matted hair.

If you believe you have seen this girl, or someone of a similar description,please do not hesitate, report immediately to your local Police Station and Lookout Radio.

Our telephone is, 0800 454 6712, that's, 0800 454 6712. You can also contact us on our website www.lookoutradio.co.uk/contact

Radio presenter voice fading, decreasing volume slowly

Headlining today's 'More Money Than Sense' is Katie Price who has recently bought a new nine and a half thousand pound Loui Vuitton hand bag says, "It's a splash of cash for my little Princess"

The contact information in this Radio Report is fabricated and is not intended to be similar or the same as and living individual or company.

Feedback is welcome!

Radio beginning using Logic Pro 01

I experimented and searched through some sounds. I was looking for something before the 60 second news update that would grasp a listener's or audience's attention. I got the inspiration from BBC THREE, 60 seconds news update  as the broadcast began there was an electronic kind of echo effect beforehand, gaining the attention of the audience. I not only want to gain attention from my protagonist but also from our TA.

These sounds are only short and small but that's all they need to be. I was searching for ages to find suitable loops that I could merge together. The clips just to the right of the  long line are the ones that I've chosen:

Experimenting with Logic Pro

The bigger looking one, that i have circled in red, I tried at first on it's own, it was an 80's style theme tune, it didn't sound right on it's own and I thought it was missing an upbeat electronic edge.

The smaller looking one, that I have circled in red, was one that I cut out of a longer electronic beating sound.

I listened to it and merged them together, making sure the timing of both sound clips transitioned smoothly onto each other. Here's the final result:

I think this has everything I want for an interruption before the news update.

It's a possible radio sound so tell me what you think and comment on any improvements, I will be asking around!